quarta-feira, 26 de novembro de 2008

Yes, We can....


Dear friends and collaborators

All of you I whish a good day and I good work with sun to heat your life.
I’m sorry if I said some mistakes so I ask you for help to correct them.
I pretend with this blog to develop our capacity of communicate and, perhaps, why not, to credit some ideas or some disorganized words and thoughts that could not be done in another place.

Thanks
Miduxa

2 comentários:

Anónimo disse...

Dear Miduxa!

Here I am!

How can I help you to improve your English?
Do you want to play games about Human Rights?
You have fun and you learn English...
e-games human rights
Love,
Maria Ivone

JLukas disse...

Here I go again...
1st - "wish" is the correct spelling;
2nd - Please consider rephrasing "and I good work with sun to heat your life". "I good work" makes no sense, does it? On the other hand, "heat" makes me think of heating food (I know that's what we've been talking about, but I like to see "LIFE" in a different perspective. Perhaps "warm" is a more appropriate word. It suggests the idea of comfortable and agreeable feelings and sensations.
3rd - FALSE FRIEND!!! "pretend" means "fingir"; you should use "intend" (which doesn't mean "entender", mas sim "pretender", "ter intenção de...").
4th - we "make mistakes" (even if you actually "say" them);
5th - I don't understand what you mean when you talk about "creditting some ideas". Sorry :(

Yes, you can.
JLukas